I gave my script to an outsider to scriptwriting and to the university itself and asked them to read through it I also asked them if they engaged with it, if they got confused and if they had to repeat certain parts because they didn’t understand. Luckily they said it was engaging. However they pointed out parts that seemed confusing or too ‘coincidental’. I noted them down then changed a few scenes, doing this gave me an extra page of story.
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