I have just finished my second draft of my script. I have got up to 9 pages so am re-reading and have asked others to read and give feed back so I can see and change some scenes. I feel as though because most of the characters are masked, its quite confusing to really show which character is which, so I have changed it so their are three main MASKED MEN and one main MASKED WOMAN. Making all the other masked people in the background.
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